Le Maku Service De Majordome (Maku's Butler service)

The problem I have with this novel is that everything is too hunky-dory for the MC. He's handsome, talented, rich AF and has a rich untalented starkid girlfriend. There's hardly any room for growth, it's a wish-fulfilment story. Everyone loves an underdog story. Perhaps, if he started out as a failure or as the struggling son of a celebrated cricketer, the readers would root for him more. There's no suspense or plot that leaves you nail biting, every chapter you know the MC's going to win like a Boss. Not telling you how you should write, I don't have that authority. There are hardly any novels on this platform on cricket, and I was excited when I found this.

So far so good author 😃 but the update is so slow 😔 Btw author, is this harem or what?

it's a funny read, love the concept of the Mandara Lotus and QinLuo being heir not master or servant

Not much to write a review upon but I like it already keep up the good work. 👍🏻

Shancai:"jimin please step away...I'm not into hugging.."

"I'm just a low level member of the Caribou Pirates. We want an alliance with you!" Caribou yelled hoping they believed him. Itachi looked at Luffy who responded with a nod, with his unspoken question answered Itachi strode to Caribou and kneeled looking into his eyes.

If Naruto questioned Ultron's statement, he didn't show it, "You're right, this is my mess." He said softly.

But the meteor men beg to differ